When writing my rough draft, I did what Professor Stukenberg had advised me to do. I put away all my research I had done from Essay 3 and just started writing a story I had come across in my research. I have never used this approach before, but I found it helpful in putting everything in my own words and only information I found really stuck out as persuasive information. It went better than I thought it would go. I found myself writing much more easily and found myself having four pages in almost no time. A question I have for my peer review group is how I can be more persuasive in making my point and how I may have lost you while reading my paper.